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All Deviations


Running through the forest
I think of my love
What she means to me
And what I'd do for her

I'd give up blood
Go on national TV
I don't think there's anything
I wouldn't do

But as I come into the clearing  
I think of one thing
As a bird swoops by
And my heart follows its soft song

I will not take this from her
This life this wonder
It's all there for her to take
But why does she choose me?

I run through the night
Following a familiar path
I find myself outside her window
Wondering if I'm allowed in

I have almost decided
When I stop and look out
Upon the shimmering night
Thinking maybe this isn't so bad

When I reach her bed  
She is still fast asleep
In her own little dream world
And I hope I'm with her there

As the first light
Spills over her face
I am still unsure
About what is best for her

For I know if I change her
I will be taking so much away
But if I leave her unprotected
What will happen then

But it does not need to be decided now
It can wait another day
Because as her soft eyes flutter open
I know I am the first thing she sees
©2007-2008 ~watercolorrr
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This is a poem I wrote from Edward Cullen's (from Twilight by Stephenie Meyer) point of view

"his love" is, of course, bella and he's worrying about changing her

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~puffehbutter:iconpuffehbutter: Aug 12, 2007, 6:36:11 AM
You already know my feelings about this, of course. ;P
~AngelicxDevotion:iconAngelicxDevotion: Aug 12, 2007, 8:30:14 PM
I really love this. I had to admit that it is very good and it does stay true to what Edward really is and what I think he is thinking towards Bella.


=) Good Job =)
~watercolorrr:iconwatercolorrr: Aug 13, 2007, 6:14:35 AM
thanks so much I had a bit of a hard time keeping my opinions about bella to myself and staying to what Edward thinks but I like how it turned out too :)
~katiexxxbeth:iconkatiexxxbeth: Aug 21, 2007, 7:00:16 PM
I LOOOOOVE IT!
Hehe. I hyper tonight lol

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His arms were stetched out
As far as they'd go
Nailed to the cross
For the whole world to know
I love you this much
And I'm waiting on you
to make up your mind
Do you love me too?
How ever long it takes I'm never giving up
I love you this much
~watercolorrr:iconwatercolorrr: Aug 21, 2007, 7:13:54 PM
haha thanks I'm hyper too :D
~ChemicallyUsed:iconChemicallyUsed: Sep 26, 2007, 6:13:57 AM
i love it. fav. ^^

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"One night, I'm gonna come to you, inside of your house, wherever you're sleeping, and I'm going to cut your throat."

(:
~pilover3-14:iconpilover3-14: Oct 11, 2007, 12:30:24 PM
hey, can I use this for school if I credit you?

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Needs to protect himself against his tendency to be too trusting, as he finds it is liable to be misunderstood or exploited by others. As a result, he adopts a critical and stand-offish attitude, participating only when assured of success.
~watercolorrr:iconwatercolorrr: Oct 11, 2007, 1:17:06 PM
uhhhhh...sure wut r u using it for?
~pilover3-14:iconpilover3-14: Oct 12, 2007, 3:42:12 AM
an "independent novel project"


ugh

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Needs to protect himself against his tendency to be too trusting, as he finds it is liable to be misunderstood or exploited by others. As a result, he adopts a critical and stand-offish attitude, participating only when assured of success.